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October 30th, 2009
#1
I'm going to let you all know how I feel DBO should have been like. Its still a great game, but just not as good IMO compared to my version. Here it is:

Story:
~Age 100:
New Namek and Earth begin interaction.
The Dark Eye emerges on Future Trunk's timeline.
Future Trunks needs an army of strong warriors to defeat them.
He goes back in time to Planet Vegeta and gains followers over there.
Trunks brings his following Saiyans to Age 1000 where they live alongside the Humans on Earth.
The Humans learn about the Saiyans' past on Planet Plant
The Humans begin mass production of the Androids in order to prevent that event form happening again.
The Dark Eye emerges on the present timeline.
Dragon ball online takes place (without Majins but with Androids and Saiyans)

Races:
Human:
Pure Human (Krillin, Tien)
Artificial Human (Android 18, 17)
Absorption Type (Gero, Android 19)

Saiyan:
Low Class (Goku, Raditz)
Elite Class (Vegeta, Nappa)

Namek:
Warrior (Piccolo. Nail)
Dragon Clan (Kami, Dende)
Demonic (Tambourine, Drum)

Racial Abilities:
Pure Human: Stealth Power (to hide form scouters)
Artificial Human: Self Destruct (android bomb)
Absorption Type: Self Destruct
Low Saiyan: Transform: Mad Oozaru
Elite Saiyan: Transform: Oozaru
Warrior Namek: Regenerate
Dragon Clan: Regenerate
Demonic Namek: Regenerate

And in my version, New Namek still exists so space travel is possible using those attack balls (Saiyan space pods) and Namekian space ships. Tell me what you guys think.

Okay now for something unrelated... *shot* How I thought DBZ should have ended: *shot again*
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Last edited on October 30th, 2009 at 10:33 PM.
October 30th, 2009
#2
Even for a fan fiction it's bad.

Someone hasn't been watching/reading DB carefully. ;o

Last edited on October 30th, 2009 at 03:28 PM.
October 30th, 2009
#3
I think that Akira Toriyama did just fine with his manga. Let's leave it at that.
October 30th, 2009
#4
Is this a joke?

I don't mean to be a dick, but I really can't tell.

Is it?

Dende?...a fighter?

Humans?...a warrior race?

What?

Last edited on October 30th, 2009 at 09:40 PM.
October 30th, 2009
#5
Wow you all are focusing on that ending more than what I wrote about dbo. I'm still working on that ending sorta, but I just put it in there cuz I... actually I don't even know why I put it in that post.
It surely wasn't a a joke though. For Dende I meant that he would be the next "Kami" for the Z-fighters. not a fighter on his own. As for Humans being a warrior race, i chose incorrect wording. I'm trying to say that the Humans are now trained in the Martial Arts involving Ki, so they reflect the Saiyans in skill of fighting. No where near "warrior like" as the Saiyans tho.

Anyway, could u guy not concentrate on that ending I wrote as much and talk about what I was hoping for dbo... (still let me know of what you think of it. I want to hear your thoughts, but please also put thoughts about my dbo version)
October 31st, 2009
#6
Low class and high class saiyans? Why would you choose low class if high is 10x better. Goku was just an exception.
October 31st, 2009
#7
They'd have their own advantages. i can't think of any right now. But one is that their Oozaru is completely mad so it maximizes the destruction caused in the transformation. The Elite Saiyans would have to control their Oozaru form so they might not have used the transformation to it's potential if they aren't very skilled at the game.

And one note. The "classes" in DBO for Humans are more like professions (engineer is a class or job?) that is why I changed them into truly racial differences, not professional differences. For Saiyans I couldn't come up with any racial breeds other than Low and Elite classes. So there ya go...
October 31st, 2009
#8
I think is nice already. Your proposal is not as enjoyable in gameplay, and the ending is not too nice.
Leave DB as it ended and DBO as is planned.
October 31st, 2009
#9
omg as a huge fan of dbz i not sure any of that would happen and saiyans as a playable race is TOOOOOO overpowered, but the androids are cool but that fan fiction is bad
October 31st, 2009
#10
Wow you all are focusing on that ending more than what I wrote about dbo. I'm still working on that ending sorta, but I just put it in there cuz I... actually I don't even know why I put it in that post.
It surely wasn't a a joke though. For Dende I meant that he would be the next "Kami" for the Z-fighters. not a fighter on his own. As for Humans being a warrior race, i chose incorrect wording. I'm trying to say that the Humans are now trained in the Martial Arts involving Ki, so they reflect the Saiyans in skill of fighting. No where near "warrior like" as the Saiyans tho.

Anyway, could u guy not concentrate on that ending I wrote as much and talk about what I was hoping for dbo... (still let me know of what you think of it. I want to hear your thoughts, but please also put thoughts about my dbo version)

I read all that you said, and I think you need to reread it yourself and go over it.
A lot of it...just doesn't make much sense. You kind of...er...twisted some of the characters and taken them away from their original design.
Just sayin'.