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I read all that you said, and I think you need to reread it yourself and go over it.
A lot of it...just doesn't make much sense. You kind of...er...twisted some of the characters and taken them away from their original design.
Just sayin'.
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The main thing I see is Tien and Chaotzu restarting the Crane School. That really doesn't make sense to me. They left on bad terms with their master and his brother, and its quite possible they'd still be around at this point.
However what I would've liked to see, is near the end of DBZ, some of the Z fighters training regular humans in their fighting style. Afterall, they were getting older. and the earth still needed defending, and all we got for that position, was Uub.